Flash Comic Mockup Test

I've finally got a very very rough demo to show off in regards to my flash comic. Please forgive the crudeness, but it's meant to be a test for me to see how readable this format would be. I'm pretty happy with the results, although there are a few issues I'd like to iron out, such how how to time the panels popping and how many transitional panels I should throw in.

There's lots of things that are incomplete with this. First off, the panels should pop up onto the screen, instead of just instantly appearing. And of course, the drawings themselves are very rough and not complete. And there are supposed to be bits of animation in a few of the panels that are obviously missing. For now, though, you can see what I've been working on the past little while.

You might want to let it load for a bit before starting the demo. Just click on the flash screen and it'll start.

*EDIT
Ok, looks like the embedding of the flash file causes the blog layout to get screwed up, so you'll have to go to this link instead.

More updates as they come.